Hara in the Capital - by din on 01:14 03 Aug 2004
Brad threatened to 'out' me so I thought I'd go ahead and post ..Hara in the Capital
I wrote this over the course of the last few days. It is a first draft and missing crucial elements of basic grammar and spelling, but it is finished to a point I rarely get to.
Over the next few days as my spare time warrants I'm going to clean it up and add a little atmosphere.
Somethings I've done on purpose, I've not explained much of the character backgrounds, location backgrounds or the general world.
This is a small stop in a series of stories involving many different characters. One thing I enjoy in reading is puzzling things out or having a bit of the unknown; so if something wasn't crucial to understanding the flow of action I left it out.
There are a few other things I wasn't thrilled with this draft, some I can fix, others involve the plot and the finale and I may be stuck with.
Brad threatened to 'out' me so I thought I'd go ahead and post ..Hara in the Capital
I wrote this over the course of the last few days. It is a first draft and missing crucial elements of basic grammar and spelling, but it is finished to a point I rarely get to.
Over the next few days as my spare time warrants I'm going to clean it up and add a little atmosphere.
Somethings I've done on purpose, I've not explained much of the character backgrounds, location backgrounds or the general world.
This is a small stop in a series of stories involving many different characters. One thing I enjoy in reading is puzzling things out or having a bit of the unknown; so if something wasn't crucial to understanding the flow of action I left it out.
There are a few other things I wasn't thrilled with this draft, some I can fix, others involve the plot and the finale and I may be stuck with.
Hara in the Capital - by Arislyn on 07:41 03 Aug 2004
Cool! I look forward to reading it.
Cool! I look forward to reading it.